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This portrait is quite stunning. It shows a great mastery of lighting used to create a soft gradient across the face including both extremes of brightness. The rim light around the right side of the body, and the shallow depth of field, make the model pop from the background. The strong lighting and depth of field also serve to create an subtle ethereal background that contrasts with the pensive, worrisome expression. This contrast makes the model's expression have a stronger impact and sets this portrait apart from many others.

The portrait may benefit from a few minor changes. The negative space is approximately equal on each side of the model, but with the model facing to the left, more lead room would make the portrait feel less claustrophobic. That said, the tightness of the composition does add to the emotional impact of the portrait. Additionally, the models eyes are asymmetrical with one squinting more than the other, which is slightly detracting. However, it seems that it may have been unavoidable given where the light falls.

Overall, this is a beautiful portrait that shows great technique and has a strong impact on the viewer. You should be extremely proud of the results you achieved.
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Emily-Wendy Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer

Finally the place where I can find amazing portraits, not only female, but also male.
Incredible job !
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fogke Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2013  Student Artist
thank you
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Ultra-Freak Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Photographer
The light is perfect
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fogke Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2012  Student Artist
thank you ;)
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El-hussieny Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Really nice eyes ;)
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fogke Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2012  Student Artist
he has :)
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yukiruogawa Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
aww it's something about this picture that makes me want to look a second time on it ~
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fogke Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Artist
:)
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reddecatur Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
A person of interest...I like this shot...)))
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fogke Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Artist
thank you
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beybi Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012
Great Light! I Love it!
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fogke Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2012  Student Artist
thx
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August 9, 2012
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Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/1024 second
Aperture
F/2.0
Focal Length
50 mm
ISO Speed
200
Date Taken
Aug 9, 2012, 4:47:54 PM
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Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
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