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November 17, 2012
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Make
Canon
Model
Canon EOS 5D Mark II
Shutter Speed
1/64 second
Aperture
F/5.0
Focal Length
17 mm
ISO Speed
1000
Date Taken
Nov 7, 2012, 10:17:53 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS3 Windows
Sensor Size
6mm
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:iconyeehaapix:
This is a very clever shot. Well done ;)

Vision: 5/5 very well-composed, subject in the centre, and an interesting angle. It's as if they're standing on a hill, if I'm correct?

Originality: 5/5 I don't think I've seen many shots like this!

Technique: 3/5 I see you used a 5D :o Wish I had that camera!! :) I'd just like to say that it looks like you over-used your flash. It looks like you used an external flash, if I'm right (correct me if I'm wring!!). I only gave you 3/5 because the picture came out very washed out. You can see on their faces, the skin is very pale and slightly indistinguishable. This is probably because you aimed the flash straight at them. Try using interesting angles. For this shot I would've aimed the flash slightly higher than where your subject is to prevent the washout that has occurred. Also, try to invest if you can in Lightroom, or similar software. It helps a lot - look up a few tutorials on YouTube, and you'll be good to go :) I use it all the time, and in a shot like this, it would help a lot because there is an effect called recovery. It takes away a lot of any washout that has occurred in an image. Then you'll get thos awesome skin tones I think you were looking for :)

Impact 4.5/5 Like i said, unusual angle, very nicely done.

I hope this helped you, and keep it up! :D :D

Dom // Infinity Photography [link]
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Artmguy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
vic a vic mi v hlave roste pribeh stojici uvnitr te fotky. dobre je to.
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fogke Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Artist
dík.. pokracuje to i takto: [link] :D ???
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Artmguy Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012
je to prilisne babske na me, ale leva je prijemna fotecky!
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fogke Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Artist
;) :) :hug:
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gndrfck Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Looks like they are laying on a grass)
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fogke Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student Artist
:)
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SadieSavage Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
it reminds me of the virgin suicides mixed with a crime scene photo. very unique, i love it!
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fogke Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2012  Student Artist
:D thanks :D
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zomby Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It looks like it's cold and the wind is blowing strongly. If the girl in red had a more severe expression it would suggest a somewhat unsettling feel to it, or more so.
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fogke Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2012  Student Artist
thx
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